Matt Bellamy

As I walk past, by the stair, Those two eyes follow me everywhere. I am not intimidated by that dirty stare. No, I am not and I don't care. I ...

This is alright. It does seem in a lot of places that you were trying to rhyme just for the sake of rhyming, and while it's great when a poem ...

I love how you made the city sound like a baby! Hehe, that's a nice, original concept, and I quite enjoyed it. It's so hard to critique something after so ...

Sorry for the delay in this crit! You've had so many in-depth critiques already, I hope I can still be somewhat helpful. I really like your poem. It is lovely ...

Hello! Sorry for the delay in this critique. I think I'll look at this line by line: If this wretched obsession wasn't beating in my chest, I like this first ...

This only has one critique? This saddens me. I really enjoyed reading this, and sorry I haven't gotten around to critiquing it sooner. A couple of things, the third stanza ...

Sorry this is so late, I know you posted in my review thread ages ago and I've been neglecting my critiquing a lot lately, but here we go! Firstly, I ...

Hooray for South Park references! :D

If you want to change your avatar, hover over My YWS at the top of any page, then click on My Avatar/Photo, scroll down the page a bit and it'll ...

Yes! It's based on something I wrote for one of the Writing Olympic events, the painting one. If I get loads done, maybe November will become NaNoEmo for me (National ...

This would flow better if all the lines were roughly the same length. Also, as I've said in one of your previous poems, you use simple, obvious rhymes, again - ...

Well, wow. At first, I didn't like this girl because she sounded so pretty and perfect. But then, how you changed it around...you described it extremely well, the way you ...

It's quite cute, but the rhyming is a little obvious - eye, sky, cry, die, me, be, free, etc. You touch on some good ideas, but you touch them...and then ...

I have another: Haha! ...What, not new-agey enough? xD

Guh, gorgeous, you people are making me so jealous today. I like the repetition here: "We’re thinking about you. We’re thinking about the December..." Also, this is a good line: ...